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Friday, January 23, 2009
The Boy in the Striped Pajamas by John Boyne
If you were Shmuel inside the fence, how would you feel when your father disappeared? If you were Bruno outside the fence, how would you feel about your Commandant father? If you could change the end of the story, how would it end?
If i was Schmuel I would be ashamed as well as depressed because once I found out about that the chamber I would think that my dad would be in there too.
if i were lost my father i would be depressed because he was my father and no one could replace him. The story seems scary because he lost his father and then he went in the room and died with his friend.
If I was the boy in the concentration camp I would be worried but I would probably already know what happened. In the concentration camp you would already know because other people died before his dad.
If i could change the end I would let the two little boys live. I would put that they heard the whistle and they start to march but since the adults where around them would live and everyone else would die. They have no reason to die because they are great kids and they could be famous!!
If I would change the end of the story I would make it so that Bruno was found hopefully that the Dad would help both him and his friend if not at least make him a servent of some sort.
I would change the end to them to finding out what happend to schemel's father that he was sent to another concentration camp so he wouldn't be worried.
If i was shmuel inside the fence i would fell lonely and scared. cause if my mom got taken away a long time ago and now my dad is taken. If i was byron outside the fence i would have felt bad for shmuel to have his parents taken from hm. If i were to change the end of the story i would have said that byrons dad would have found his son and had a soft side and adopted shmuel as a second son to make his son happy.
If I could change the end of the story,I would have the kids hear the whistle but decide not to go and march. They would have lived and found the other boy's dad.
If I could alter the story Bruno would be discovered by one of his father's minions and Schemel would still die. Bruno would grow feeling sorry for Schemel and Bruno would change his dad's ways.
If I could change the end of the story I would change it for the gas tank would not blow up , and they would find Bruno and Schmuel and the commander would let his friend Schmuel move in with them, and that they stop the camp.
I think Bruno would probably get tired of how controlling his father is. He probably would also be sad that his father isn't like an average good-loving dad. His dad is strict and a neat-freak.
I would feel terrible if my father was missing. If I could change the ending of the story it would end with Shmuel finding his father and Bruno escaping.
I would change the ending by making Bruno live. I think he should live because he isn't like his father. It's his dad's fault he died because they should of looked after bruno instead of leaving him to take care of himself. I'd also make Bruno and his friend find his papa and they would escape and never have to go back.
If i was Bruno I would appreciate my life, family, and friends more. Since Schmuel had nothing and he lost his mother, sisters, and father. Bruno needs to appreciate what and who he has.
If I was Shmuel than I would be devastated if I lost my father. I would try as much as possibe to do my labor job but not give up on trying to find my father. Know matter what I would not stop trying to search for my father unless I knew for sure that he was dead.
If i was Shmuel I would feel weird that my father was missing. Cause my mother would have been taken away from me a long time ago then my father is missing. If I was Brono I would have felt sad for Shmuel.
If i could change anything at the end I would change Bruno and Shmuel going back in Concentration Camp and looking for his dad because if his father died then sadly he just died (he couldn't do anything about it) :(
If I could change the ending i would have Shmuel and Bruno find Shmuel's father escape the camp before the whistle blew and then have the part where Bruno calls Shmuel his best friend at the fence while he puts on his slicker and boots. Also have Bruno go back to Berlin with his family.
If I could change the end of the story, it would be that Shmuel and Bruno would not have died. Shmuel would have instead been reunited with his father and had escaped with Bruno's help. Then they later would be able to be friends without having to hide. :)
Well i wish that the ending could have changed because i wish Bruno and Shmuel could have lived their lives and still be alive.I also wish that Shmuel could have got out the concentration camp.I also wish that shmuel 's father could have still lived. It also would have been nice for Bruno's dad to have stayed in Berlin so that he would have had a kind of good life.
If i were to change anything at the end it would be when the 2 boys heard the marching bell they should have ran away and try to escape that would have made a suspensful ending
i would have changed the end of the story by the parents noticing that Bruno was gone earlier. They would have went looking for Bruno and Shamuel. Before they got to the gas chambers they would have looked in the marching line. They would have found Bruno. They also would have hidden Shamuel in there house or tooken him in as another son.
this book should of ended like shmuel told that his dad wasn't really gone he was in his room the whole time he just needed help getting out of the camp. They got out and shmuel live with his friend in the basement of his house.
If i was the boy in the fence that lost his father i would feel alone cause first he lost his mother and his sisters and now his father. to tell you the truth i would be heartbroken if i lost any of my family members. :)
If I was Bruno I would have made the ending like this. Shmell would have saved Bruno at the last second and would have ran out of the concentration camp as fast as they could. I think it was a sad time for those kids and the ending could have ended a little better but honestly I think I would have had a better chance of surviving.
If I was that kids friend I would've told him that we don't have to get in the tank and then we would both crawl back out of the fence and and demand my parents to care us back to Berlin and live out our lives till the war is over.
If I was Bruno I would have never went with shmuel because he got Bruno killed and what kind of friend gets his other friend killed that is not cool If I was Bruno I would have said see you later you can die not me. I would have let him go he should have ran away he must have been scared and Brunos dady is mean my daddy is way better than him that dont make no dag on since his daddy is cruel and foul.
First of all, if I were Shmuel and my dad was missing I would panic, because that is the only family he has. If I were Bruno I wouldn't look up to my dad, because he shows no love for Bruno and he is part of the Natzi force. I wasn't impressed by the end. Even though that is how things were, there should have been some type of justice!!!!!
If i was bruno i would have never been in side the consintration camp in the first place and if i was schmelll i woud have been sad and scard for my dada and looked until i found him i would have told bruno not to come in dere in the first place that what he get
If i could change the end of the story i would not killed he's kid. If i was the boy i would be mad it the boy for not talking the men that he give my the food.
I would have been sad and aggravated I would be disappointed in him and how he is treading the people. It would be that they found his father in the camp.
The dad should not have killed his own son. The dad is a very bad person to do that to a another person .If I was shmell, I would at least say something to the dad.
If i can change the end of the story, my side would say that the man had to kill his son. He didn't want too so he ended up killing his self so he can keep his son alive. His son moved to a different state and he got shot by one of his dad's workers.
The way I would end the story is by instead of Bruno going under the fence let the other boy go to Bruno side and let the boy and Bruno look for his dad and it would be a happy ending.
If i was Shmelll then i would feel sad,because he's the only one left for me since they took my sister and mother away, because the female and male couldn't be together.
*At the end of the story i think i could change it by... a person coming were Shmell and Bruno and save them before the snake come and kill them.
I would change the ending in no way, I would leave it because you have to learn life and if you didn't know back then well you would have to suffer, but really I wouldn't change the ending because some people like endings like that I mean like I feel bad for the boys, but I like those books.
if i could change the end of the story i would've kept it like it was because the boys died together but i give Bruno a chance to tell Schmuel that he never had any friends and that he was thankful that Shmuel was there and bruno didn't know that he was in a concentration camp
**I would make it so that Bruno knew what was going to happen,so Bruno and Shmuel made their way out and Bruno told Shmuel what was going on and then they became best friends**
I would be kind of hopless but as soon as I entered I probably wouldve lost hope. And if my father was a solder I would feel kind of fortunite that Iwasnt in the camp myself. But if i could hange the ending of the story it would probly be that they ran out of posiones gas and posponed it so they could escape together and still be friends
If I gave the story an alternate ending it would be different. Bruno would realize what was happening to Schmuel and tell his mother about it. Bruno's mother would help Schmuel escape and she would take him in.Bruno's father would be killed. Schmuel would become apart of the family and no one except Schmuel, Bruno and Bruno's mother would know.
If i would change it i would feel sad for Shmell and bruno because they were still young and did not get to live that long get his father found also i would not treat the children that way because its not nice thats how i would end he story )-:
If I could change the ending I would have made it so instead of the boys dying in a gas chamber the boys would have just escaped the concentration camp or "prison" and run away with bruno ,his mother and his sister and lived in Berlin
If i could change the end of the story. I would make the boy go in the tank and the gas chamber brakes down and the boys get out of the tank and shmell goes to school and gets a good job
If I can change the end of the story I will let the two boys live. And let the little boy find his father and let bruno get out of the concentration camp.
If I could write an alternate ending to the story i would have Bruno and Shmell find his father and then the and have Bruno escape from the concentration camp and still have Shmell still be there and them still being friends for the rest of the time Shmell and the rest of the jews are in there.
If i could change the end of the story then i would have made it were the two boys would have gotten out. And also that jewish boy got to go home with 1 of a family member that is still alive.
If my father disappeared i mite not care because he was mean and if i was bruno i would be happy that dat boy daddy disappeared because he was mean and i would not change nothin at the end because they should not have did wat they did
If I was Bruno I would be nonchalant about the whole thing because he never should had went in the fence in the first place.So that's how I would change the end of story :]
If i couldn't find my dad i would freak out and be upset. And at the end i would change it to where the nazi father would love his son and shemll and bruno didnt go to the gas chamber that the father saw them let bronu and shemll both out.shemll lived with bruno an his family.
The way the book should have ended is that the boy got out of the camp. Then they maed the little boy a part of their family so now the man would have 3 kids. Then the dad died because the men solders had betrayed him.
If i could change the ending of the story i would make Schmuel and Bruno come out of the tank safely and they would make it back home and lived a good life from there.:]
if i could change the end of the story i would say that they shouldnt have not went under the fence and they would have stayed at the camp but if they did i wish they could have stayed alive.=[
If i could change the end of the story, I would have hid and not go to march. Schmuel and Bruno would have never died in the gas chamber and would have found found his dad.THE END!!!! :} :}
If I were Shmuel I would help the boy get far away from the concentration camp. To build a small house in the woods or around the house and go out there everyday to feed him and help him get better. Thats how the story would end. I f I were Shmuel I would speak up and tell the people that I was such and such's son and maybe they would let me go.
If i was Scmell i would be upset my dad was gone because all his family was gone and his dad just disappeared.And i thought bruno was blind if he Didn't notice his dad was a bad Guy!
If i was the kid in the camp and lost my dad then i would get people to help me look for my father.If i couldn't find him then most likely I would feel horrible ,sad and scared since he was the only family member i had left.
If I were to make a new ending I would let shmull and bruno stay alive and I would get brunos father to take everyone out of the camp and live happily ever after. I would also make both boys stay friends.
If i was shmell then I would convince bruno not to come in .If Bruno could get inside the camp then shmell could get out.Bruno should Have tried to break shmell out if bruno knew Shmell got beat so bad.Shmell could have been saved.The story could have ended good.
i would find a way to get out to where me and shmuel would live and run away to an allie territory and live together fight as a spy against germany and join the underground
If I was Shmuell I would have felt terrible that my dad was gone and that was my only family I had left. I would also be afraid of what could of happened to him. I would have never let my friend in that day because I knew where my dad was, and I knew what happened to him.
if i could change anything in the story i will make sure that bruno and Schmuel ..... and i will change that bruno and schmuel would live happily ever after
IF I COULD CHANGE THE ENDING I WOULD MAKE SURE THAT BRUNO AND SCHMUEL WILL BREAK OUT THE CAMP TOGATHER AND BRUNOS DAD WILL TAKE SCHMUEL IN AS HIS SON AND THAY WILL LIVE HAPPYLY EVER AFTER
If i was the boy in the camp , when I was dusting off the glass i would ask bruno to take me to his room and hide me in a place where nobody looks and stay there till aldolf was gone and everyday i would ask him to feed him give him a bath. Then we would go back and try to find my grampa when we find him we would bring him back to the house and he would take care of them without his dad,mom,sister,or anybody else knowing they were there and after they look better and not sick he would give them money to go have a better life.
If I was shmuel, i would tell Bruno that his father is a very bad man and that Bruno should try to save everyone in the concentration camp. Like try to convince his dad (Hitler) that this is a bad thing that he is doing and he should stop. If he does convince his dad then they can be friends for has long has they want.
if i could change the end of the story i would make it as the father tried everything to kill his son but he never could and that people to the police that he was trying to kill his son and they put the father behind bars and both boys stay friends to the end
i would make it so that shmuel would find his dad. And bruno would help them escape by finding a german ss uniform for shmuels dad to dress up in. Then he would say that he had orders from hitler to leave the camp.
If I could change the end of the story I would make it so that the camp will get more food and they will have nice places to sleep.They would have better clothes to sleep in,and they will have days off and no one would ever get killed.
If I would change the ending it would be that the boy and his friend would try to escape. Also, I would see if I could find the boy's friend father and let them live with him.
I could not change the ending because it shows what people went through and what happened in world war 2. And the holocaust because it shows that it was really reality.
if could change the end of the story i will i be scared to know my farther will be in an chamber and i will also be scared if i lost my farther i wouldn't know what to do and i will let the two little boys stay alive.
IF I COULD CHANGE THE END OF THE STORY I WOULD MAKE IT SAY.....THAT BRUNO AND SHMUEL WOUL MAKE A WAY TO GET OUT OF THE TANK AND SINCE SHMUEL DID NOT KNO WHERE HIS PAPA WAS THE DAD MIGHT LET HIM STAY WITH HIM
If i was Bruno I would have wenthome for dinner, and also i would have took shmuel bach to the Concentration camp, To make surethat he got in the gate. But if i was the dad [Hitler]I would always know were my son is at all times before i started hurting the others
At the end of the story.I would have changed how the little boy died.I would change how he like died off the back.I would have talked about how months and months past. Then I would have said that he died because of his father being a solider for Hitler.
I will feel said if i can't feind my dad and i will try to feed the kids more fod and i will be really sad if my kids died from not eating a lot of food.
I would change the part were there in the march and the storm came and the little boy would say you are my best friend i and then the two little boys would try to save everyone and try to work together as a team. The part when the boy said his father was missing at the end they would find him and it would be the best day ever
If I could change the ending of the story I would change the part when the gas tank blew up and and killed them. I would also make sure Shmuel found out what happened to his father.
If I were Shmuel I would be worried and scared because there would be no one there for me. If I were Bruno I would be sad because I would never have anyone to talk to because his father never talks to him.
if I could change the end of the story. i would still do the samething but I would make the two kids survive and let the soilders die before I let the two kids die and let them live happily ever after and then they will go to find the father of shmell and bruno helps him
If I could change the ending of the story Shmuel and Bruno would of made it out of the tank and didn't find his father and he would have to live with Bruno and his family and is treated well
If I could change the ending of the story , I would make it so Shamel (the boy inside the fence) and Burno (The boy outside the fence) could be friends forever and that shamel could find his father and get out of the situation he was living in.
If I were Shamel I would feel sad that my father left. Even though he didn't know him I would still be sad just because of the thought that my father had left.
If I were the boy behind the fence i would forget about my father and escape under the fence and kill the boy and start acting like him and live my life .
If I was the boy and I knew that my father had left I would be really sad and I would be willing to go find him just like Shumuel in the story, I would also be worried about about him.
At the end of the story I would have changed the son and his friend getting killed.I would change, like when the man gave him the food and the man walked in he would of let them off with a warning and if they did it again they would be beat.If my father were gone I would go looking for him and and fell nervous and sad.
If I could change the end of the story I would make Hitler whip his son but when he was done he would find out that he whipped his son. Then he killed his son's friend.
I would change the ending so the two boys would not die and the father would not kill the jews.Then the Jews would be left alone for the rest of there lives.
If I was bruno i would stop the gas tank and make sure it would not blow up so the people wont turn into ash and then bruno can tell his dad to not to do this to the people.
If i could change the ending I will make the commandant turn on Hitler and shoot him and free the prisoners and the boy in the fence found his father. Also they moved back to berlin
If I would change the end of the story the two little boys would have got away before the bell had rang. The two boys would have went under the fence and heed away while the smoke was going. Then he would supply food, water, and shared his clothing.
I think that if I was Schemel I would feel so sad that my father was missing and if I was Bruno I would be mad at my father if I found out that he was killing people who were blamed by Adolf Hitler even if they didn't do anything to deserve this and at the end of the story I think that Schemel and Bruno should have lived and found Schemel's father rather than died.
If I was schmuel I would fell sad.The reason because that was the only father he had.Also it seem like his father loved him so much.So he (the father) went to go look forhis only son .but not knowing that his ashes were in the tank.
If I could change the end of the story I would change the part when the man kill both of the boy's. I would change that because I would feel bad for myself for killing two innocent little boy's.That's why I would change the end of the story.
If I could change the end of the story I would make lil boys live. Schmuel I would find his father and mom and his sisters. Bruno would have asked his father about his job and why he did what he did. Bruno's father would come to his sences and realize what he was doing was wrong and he would change his evil ways.
If I could change the end of the story it would be that Bruno father would realize how terrible he has been and treat him how he treats his sister. For Shmuel that he would live and find his father and be happy again
235 comments:
1 – 200 of 235 Newer› Newest»at the end the thing that i would change would be that a soldure found his son and told the fathers son at the end of it to make a dramatic effect
if i was shmell i would feel sad if my father was gone
IF I WAS THE BOY IN THE FENCE I WOULD BE WORRIED AND SCARD
if i could change the ending i make it where bruno and the boy shmuel had made it out the tank and make safely back home to where they belong
If i was Schmuel I would be ashamed as well as depressed because once I found out about that the chamber I would think that my dad would be in there too.
if i were lost my father i would be depressed because he was my father and no one could replace him. The story seems scary because he lost his father and then he went in the room and died with his friend.
if i was buno i would have told the boy that i could not go in to the concentration camp cause it's to risky.
If I was the boy in the concentration camp I would be worried but I would probably already know what happened. In the concentration camp you would already know because other people died before his dad.
If i could change the end I would let the two little boys live. I would put that they heard the whistle and they start to march but since the adults where around them would live and everyone else would die. They have no reason to die because they are great kids and they could be famous!!
If I would change the end of the story I would make it so that Bruno was found hopefully that the Dad would help both him and his friend if not at least make him a servent of some sort.
I would change the end to them to finding out what happend to schemel's father that he was sent to another concentration camp so he wouldn't be worried.
If i was shmuel inside the fence i would fell lonely and scared. cause if my mom got taken away a long time ago and now my dad is taken. If i was byron outside the fence i would have felt bad for shmuel to have his parents taken from hm. If i were to change the end of the story i would have said that byrons dad would have found his son and had a soft side and adopted shmuel as a second son to make his son happy.
If I could change the end of the story,I would have the kids hear the whistle but decide not to go and march. They would have lived and found the other boy's dad.
If I could change the end I would make it so that Bruno and scmell would get the other people to escape...
If I could alter the story Bruno would be discovered by one of his father's minions and Schemel would still die. Bruno would grow feeling sorry for Schemel and Bruno would change his dad's ways.
If I could change the end of the story I would change it for the gas tank would not blow up , and they would find Bruno and Schmuel and the commander would let his friend Schmuel move in with them, and that they stop the camp.
I would change the ending to a more happier ending.I would make the ending where the boys live and they would live a happy long life!
I think Bruno would probably get tired of how controlling his father is. He probably would also be sad that his father isn't like an average good-loving dad. His dad is strict and a neat-freak.
If I was Shmuel I would be very worried that my father was gone. Something bad could happen or someone could kill him by putting him in the trench.
If My Life Was Like Shmeel I Would Of Looked For My
Father A Little Harder Then To Take Someone's Life For It Even If He Didn't Mean For It To Happen
I would feel terrible if my father was missing. If I could change the ending of the story it would end with Shmuel finding his father and Bruno escaping.
I wouldchange the ending by Schmuel finding his father and other family members. I would also change it by Bruno getting back to his family.
If i was Bruno I would try and help Shmuel survive and give him food and beg my father to let him live.
I would change the ending by making Bruno live. I think he should live because he isn't like his father. It's his dad's fault he died because they should of looked after bruno instead of leaving him to take care of himself. I'd also make Bruno and his friend find his papa and they would escape and never have to go back.
If i was Bruno I would appreciate my life, family, and friends more. Since Schmuel had nothing and he lost his mother, sisters, and father. Bruno needs to appreciate what and who he has.
If I was Shmuel than I would be devastated if I lost my father. I would try as much as possibe to do my labor job but not give up on trying to find my father. Know matter what I would not stop trying to search for my father unless I knew for sure that he was dead.
If i was Shmuel I would feel weird that my father was missing. Cause my mother would have been taken away from me a long time ago then my father is missing. If I was Brono I would have felt sad for Shmuel.
If i could change anything at the end I would change Bruno and Shmuel going back in Concentration Camp and looking for his dad because if his father died then sadly he just died (he couldn't do anything about it) :(
If i were Bruno I would be sad that my father kills the innocent. I wouldnt have a good relationship with him
If I could change the ending i would have Shmuel and Bruno find Shmuel's father escape the camp before the whistle blew and then have the part where Bruno calls Shmuel his best friend at the fence while he puts on his slicker and boots. Also have Bruno go back to Berlin with his family.
If I could change the end of the story, it would be that Shmuel and Bruno would not have died. Shmuel would have instead been reunited with his father and had escaped with Bruno's help. Then they later would be able to be friends without having to hide. :)
if i were Shmuel, i would be worried to death, not knowing where my family is.
Well i wish that the ending could have changed because i wish Bruno and Shmuel could have lived their lives and still be alive.I also wish that Shmuel could have got out the concentration camp.I also wish that shmuel 's father could have still lived. It also would have been nice for Bruno's dad to have stayed in Berlin so that he would have had a kind of good life.
If i were to change anything at the end it would be when the 2 boys heard the marching bell they should have ran away and try to escape that would have made a suspensful ending
at the end the thing that i would have changed that the boy found his fther and he let him and shmil go.
if i can change the end i would make it so the little boy esape the camp and would never be found.
I would change the end of the story by the little boy to help Shmell escape from the consitration camp and tell his father this is wrong.
if i could change the ending of the storyit would be with shmuel finding his his father and the boy escaping
If i could change the end of the story the to little boys would have ever went in to the chamber they would have escape to the Bruno's house
i would have changed the end of the story by the parents noticing that Bruno was gone earlier. They would have went looking for Bruno and Shamuel. Before they got to the gas chambers they would have looked in the marching line. They would have found Bruno. They also would have hidden Shamuel in there house or tooken him in as another son.
this book should of ended like shmuel told that his dad wasn't really gone he was in his room the whole time he just needed help getting out of the camp. They got out and shmuel live with his friend in the basement of his house.
If i was the boy in the fence that lost his father i would feel alone cause first he lost his mother and his sisters and now his father. to tell you the truth i would be heartbroken if i lost any of my family members. :)
If i was shmuel i would feel sad and lonely that my father was gone
if i was bruno i would tell parents that i met a friend at camp in let him come over to play .He would stay at his house.
If I was the boy in the striped pajamas I would be worried that my dad might be hurt.
If I was Bruno I would have made the ending like this.
Shmell would have saved Bruno at the last second and would have ran out of the concentration camp as fast as they could. I think it was a sad time for those kids and the ending could have ended a little better but honestly I think I would have had a better chance of surviving.
If I where the boy behind the fence I would be sad and feel empty inside
I would feel mad if my my father had left me in the fence alone I would be mad.
If I was to change the ending I would make that bruno switch live
If I was outside of the fence and my father was missing I would feel sad and scared.If I was in the camber with my friend I would think of a plan.
if i was bruno i would never did it,i would nerver murch
If I was Shmuel I would be upset and in a lot of pain.I would also be scared because I wouldn't want to get abused and have whelps all over me.
if I was Shmuel I would be scared and in pain to be on the other side of fence.
I would end the story by shmell finding his father and that him and Bruno wouldn't have died by the gas tank.
if i was the boy in the fence i would have told the son his father is being very mean and killing people for no reasons at all and then ran away
If i was schmuel i would not go into the concentration camp because it is a harsh camp
I think it should end like schmuel finds his farther. if I was Shmuel i would have been very scared to death.
If I could change the end of the story, I would make it so that Bruno and Schmell ran away and made it to Bruno's mom and they wold live in Berlin.
If I was that kids friend I would've told him that we don't have to get in the tank and then we would both crawl back out of the fence and and demand my parents to care us back to Berlin and live out our lives till the war is over.
well if I could Change story I would make shmual and Bruno bust out of the consentration camp
If I was Bruno I would have never went with shmuel because he got Bruno killed and what kind of friend gets his other friend killed that is not cool If I was Bruno I would have said see you later you can die not me. I would have let him go he should have ran away he must have been scared and Brunos dady is mean my daddy is way better than him that dont make no dag on since his daddy is cruel and foul.
First of all, if I were Shmuel and my dad was missing I would panic, because that is the only family he has. If I were Bruno I wouldn't look up to my dad, because he shows no love for Bruno and he is part of the Natzi force. I wasn't impressed by the end. Even though that is how things were, there should have been some type of justice!!!!!
If i was bruno i would have never been in side the consintration camp in the first place and if i was schmelll i woud have been sad and scard for my dada and looked until i found him i would have told bruno not to come in dere in the first place that what he get
If i couid change the ending,i would make it so that they put sleeping gas,then move them back to there homes.:3
If i was shmuel in the fence i would have told the bruno his father is murdering all of the jews and killing people for no reasons at all.
If i was Schmuel i would feel all alone and scared.
if my dad was in there i would try to find him and
get out of there as fast as i could.
If i could change the end of the story i would not killed he's kid. If i was the boy i would be mad it the boy for not talking the men that he give my the food.
If i could change the end of the story i would let him find his dad and then lock him up for a day in kill his dad.
I would have been sad and aggravated I would be disappointed in him and how he is treading the people. It would be that they found his father
in the camp.
The dad should not have killed his own son. The dad is a very bad person to do that to a another person .If I was shmell, I would at least say something to the dad.
I will relley be upset about my father disapered. I be mad if my dad be that. I keep the boys alive and will not kill the boys.
If i was Shmuel i well fell terrible that my own father well run away from me but stay with my sister.
If i can change the end of the story, my side would say that the man had to kill his son. He didn't want too so he ended up killing his self so he can keep his son alive. His son moved to a different state and he got shot by one of his dad's workers.
I would fill said if my dad had got died.
I would end the story with the boy fin the dad.
If my dad was missing I would be so worried about him an crying for him.
if my dad disappeared i would feel said and i will frond him and send him stuff
If my father was goin I would be said and hope he came back to me.
If i can change the end of the story i would give the people food.
If i can change the end of the story.I will change it to something nice. Like everyone stand in the circle. and talk about what been treating u wrong.
If i was Shmuel i would be scared and worried and sad...i would end the story by not kiling the two boys and with a happy ending.**
If my father was gone i would feel sad and mad and i would try to do something about it
AT THE END OF THE STORY I THINK IT WAS RATHER SAD THAT HIS OWN FATHER KILLED HIS SON BUT SINCE THEY DIED TOGETHER IT WASA GOOD ENDING
I would have made it at the end of the story where Bruno and Shmeel would make it out safely and were allowed to be friends.
If I was Shmeell I would be sad and mad that my dad was gone and the only family he had left.
:)
The way I would end the story is by instead of Bruno going under the fence let the other boy go to Bruno side and let the boy and Bruno look for his dad and it would be a happy ending.
If i was Shmelll then i would feel sad,because he's the only one left for me since they took my sister and mother away, because the female and male couldn't be together.
*At the end of the story i think i could change it by... a person coming were Shmell and Bruno and save them before the snake come and kill them.
THE END
If i could change the ending i would of made sure that the little boys would live and that shmuel got out of the concentration camp
I would change the ending in no way, I would leave it because you have to learn life and if you didn't know back then well you would have to suffer, but really I wouldn't change the ending because some people like endings like that I mean like I feel bad for the boys, but I like those books.
MILTON,JR.
I could changed the ending I would have put that the Father would get HANG FOR LETTING HIS SON DIE!
if i could change the end of the story i would've kept it like it was because the boys died together but i give Bruno a chance to tell Schmuel that he never had any friends and that he was thankful that Shmuel was there and bruno didn't know that he was in a concentration camp
**I would make it so that Bruno knew what was going to happen,so Bruno and Shmuel made their way out and Bruno told Shmuel what was going on and then they became best friends**
If i could change the ending of the story it would be when Bruno and Shmuel found his dad when they had heard the sound ,but found him alive.
I would be kind of hopless but as soon as I entered I probably wouldve lost hope. And if my father was a solder I would feel kind of fortunite that Iwasnt in the camp myself. But if i could hange the ending of the story it would probly be that they ran out of posiones gas and posponed it so they could escape together and still be friends
If I gave the story an alternate ending it would be different. Bruno would realize what was happening to Schmuel and tell his mother about it. Bruno's mother would help Schmuel escape and she would take him in.Bruno's father would be killed. Schmuel would become apart of the family and no one except Schmuel, Bruno and Bruno's mother would know.
If i would change it i would feel sad for Shmell and bruno because they were still young and did not get to live that long get his father found also i would not treat the children that way because its not nice thats how i would end he story )-:
If I could change the ending I would have made it so instead of the boys dying in a gas chamber the boys would have just escaped the concentration camp or "prison" and run away with bruno ,his mother and his sister and lived in Berlin
I would have had one the soilder's come and tell Bruno's father that Bruno is in the gas chamber,and his father would have ran in and saved him .
If i could change the end of the story. I would make the boy go in the tank and the gas chamber brakes down and the boys get out of the tank and shmell goes to school and gets a good job
iF i were shumell i would be scared out of my skin if i lost my father.
If I can change the end of the story I will let the two boys live. And let the little boy find his father and let bruno get out of the concentration camp.
I would have let Bruno& Shmuel live.
If I can change the end of the story Bruno and Shmell ll wouldn't have died
If i was Schmel I would have tried to run away once i got out of the concentration camp
IF I WAS BOY I WOULD NOT GO IN I WOULD TRY TO HELP FROM THE OUTSIDE
If I could write an alternate ending to the story i would have Bruno and Shmell find his father and then the and have Bruno escape from the concentration camp and still have Shmell still be there and them still being friends for the rest of the time Shmell and the rest of the jews are in there.
AT the end the boy would be alive . And he would find his dad at home talking about how he is going to tale the people how he got killed.
At the end i think shmell should survive but not his friend because he die of hunger.
If i could change the end of the story then i would have made it were the two boys would have gotten out. And also that jewish boy got to go home with 1 of a family member that is still alive.
At the end of the story,I would change that bruno would help shumel and some other people escape from the consentration camp.
At the end i think shmell should survive but not his friend because he die of hunger.
If I could change the end of the story I would let Bruno and Schmuel find his father in the tank and let them die together
If I were Schmuel, I would be afraid of being behind the fence!!!!!!
If i could change the story i would make that bruno and schmuel would be found and bruno let schmuel live with bruno
If i could change the story i would make that bruno and schmuel would be found and bruno let schmuel live with bruno
If my father disappeared i mite not care because he was mean and if i was bruno i would be happy that dat boy daddy disappeared because he was mean and i would not change nothin at the end because they should not have did wat they did
If I was Bruno I would be nonchalant about the whole thing because he never should had went in the fence in the first place.So that's how I would change the end of story :]
If i couldn't find my dad i would freak out and be upset. And at the end i would change it to where the nazi father would love his son and shemll and bruno didnt go to the gas chamber that the father saw them let bronu and shemll both out.shemll lived with bruno an his family.
The way the book should have ended is that the boy got out of the camp. Then they maed the little boy a part of their family so now the man would have 3 kids. Then the dad died because the men solders had betrayed him.
If i could change the ending of the story i would make Schmuel and Bruno come out of the tank safely and they would make it back home and lived a good life from there.:]
if i could change the end of the story i would say that they shouldnt have not went under the fence and they would have stayed at the camp but if they did i wish they could have stayed alive.=[
If i could change the end of the story, I would have hid and not go to march. Schmuel and Bruno would have never died in the gas chamber and would have found found his dad.THE END!!!! :} :}
if i was shcmel i would of got the food and ran away and try to escape and get rich get a car and have a good life
If I were Shmuel I would help the boy get far away from the concentration camp. To build a small house in the woods or around the house and go out there everyday to feed him and help him get better. Thats how the story would end. I f I were Shmuel I would speak up and tell the people that I was such and such's son and maybe they would let me go.
If I was the boy in the fence, I would feel sad that I couldn't find my dad.
If I was Shmuell I would have got out of the kitchen quick.
If i was Scmell i would be upset my dad was gone because all his family was gone and his dad just disappeared.And i thought bruno was blind if he Didn't notice his dad was a bad Guy!
if i were shmuel and my father disappeared id feel bad since he's the only person his family because doesn't know were his mom and sisters are.
If i was the kid in the camp and lost my dad then i would get people to help me look for my father.If i couldn't find him then most likely I would feel horrible ,sad and scared since he was the only family member i had left.
If I were to make a new ending I would let shmull and bruno stay alive and I would get brunos father to take everyone out of the camp and live happily ever after. I would also make both boys stay friends.
If i was shmell then I would convince bruno not to come in .If Bruno could get inside the camp then shmell could get out.Bruno should Have tried to break shmell out if bruno knew Shmell got beat so bad.Shmell could have been saved.The story could have ended good.
If i were Shmuel inside the fence and i couldnt find my dad i would feel scared and worried because i would think he was dead.
I would feel sad after my friend got beat because i would know it was my fault.
i would find a way to get out to where me and shmuel would live and run away to an allie territory and live together fight as a spy against germany and join the underground
If i was shumel i would of been sad,and if i was bruno i would been mad and worried.If i could change the ending i would of made the father come back.
If I was Shmuell I would have felt terrible that my dad was gone and that was my only family I had left. I would also be afraid of what could of happened to him. I would have never let my friend in that day because I knew where my dad was, and I knew what happened to him.
If i could change the end off story, i would have said that Bruno and his family moved to Poland with Schmuel.
if i could change anything in the story i will make sure that bruno and Schmuel ..... and i will change that bruno and schmuel would live happily ever after
IF I COULD CHANGE THE ENDING I WOULD
MAKE SURE THAT BRUNO AND SCHMUEL WILL BREAK OUT THE CAMP TOGATHER AND BRUNOS DAD WILL TAKE SCHMUEL IN AS HIS SON AND THAY WILL LIVE HAPPYLY EVER AFTER
THATS MY ENDING
If i was the boy in the camp , when I was dusting off the glass i would ask bruno to take me to his room and hide me in a place where nobody looks and stay there till aldolf was gone and everyday i would ask him to feed him give him a bath. Then we would go back and try to find my grampa when we find him we would bring him back to the house and he would take care of them without his dad,mom,sister,or anybody else knowing they were there and after they look better and not sick he would give them money to go have a better life.
If I was shmuel, i would tell Bruno that his father is a very bad man and that Bruno should try to save everyone in the concentration camp. Like try to convince his dad (Hitler) that this is a bad thing that he is doing and he should stop. If he does convince his dad then they can be friends for has long has they want.
i think they they shoud have not died. that was so sad
I would feel real sad and i wouldn't have any one to talk with about any of my problems or things in school .
if i could change the end of the story i would make it as the father tried everything to kill his son but he never could and that people to the police that he was trying to kill his son and they put the father behind bars and both boys stay friends to the end
I would be mad and sad at the same time.It would sad,I would not own him for my dad.
i think they shold have not died at da end dat waz so sad
i would make it so that shmuel would find his dad. And bruno would help them escape by finding a german ss uniform for shmuels dad to dress up in. Then he would say that he had orders from hitler to leave the camp.
If I could change the end of the story I would make it so that the camp will get more food and they will have nice places to sleep.They would have better clothes to sleep in,and they will have days off and no one would ever get killed.
i Would let both of them live
If i could change the end of the story i would have shut down the camp and no one wold have died!
I would change the ending by making Schumel and the other boy be able to excape
If I would change the ending it would be that the boy and his friend would try to escape. Also, I would see if I could find the boy's friend father and let them live with him.
I would change the end of the story, I'll change who they would die and they will find an excape.
1) If my father died i would be so upset, i would also be scared, Because I would know I would be killed too, because im part of family.
If I changed the ending I would change it to both boys lived and Shmul would find his dad and reunite with his whole family.And Byron would behappy
I could not change the ending because it shows what people went through and what happened in world war 2. And the holocaust because it shows that it was really reality.
I would change the story I will not have went inside the camber .
I would feel very discourage and feel lonley
if could change the end of the story i will i be scared to know my farther will be in an chamber and i will also be scared if i lost my farther i wouldn't know what to do and i will let the two little boys stay alive.
If i was shmuel i will be very sad if my father was gone and at the end of the story if the two boys will still be alive and b a happy ever after.
IF I COULD CHANGE THE END OF THE STORY I WOULD MAKE IT SAY.....THAT BRUNO AND SHMUEL WOUL MAKE A WAY TO GET OUT OF THE TANK AND SINCE SHMUEL DID NOT KNO WHERE HIS PAPA WAS THE DAD MIGHT LET HIM STAY WITH HIM
If i was Bruno I would have wenthome for dinner, and also i would have took shmuel bach to the Concentration camp, To make surethat he got in the gate. But if i was the dad [Hitler]I would always know were my son is at all times before i started hurting the others
At the end of the story.I would have changed how the little boy died.I would change how he like died off the back.I would have talked about how months and months past. Then I would have said that he died because of his father being a solider for Hitler.
If i was shmall i will fill sad and mad the my father was gone.
I will feel said if i can't feind my dad and i will try to feed the kids more fod and i will be really sad if my kids died from not eating a lot of food.
I would change the part were there in the march and the storm came and the little boy would say you are my best friend i and then the two little boys would try to save everyone and try to work together as a team. The part when the boy said his father was missing at the end they would find him and it would be the best day ever
If I could change the ending of the story I would change the part when the gas tank blew up and and killed them. I would also make sure Shmuel found out what happened to his father.
If I were Shmuel I would be worried and scared because there would be no one there for me. If I were Bruno I would be sad because I would never have anyone to talk to because his father never talks to him.
If i was Shmuel and my father disappeared I would be wondering where he was.
If i was Shmuel i would be sad and anger. I would be worried and scared to death.
I would feel scared if I could not find my dad and I would be very worried. I would be trying to find someone to help me find my dad.
I would be mad
I would change the end of the story to where Bruno's father found both of the boys and got them out before the gas was released.
If I was Shmuel ,I would be afraid that i didn't know where my parents are...
if I could change the end of the story. i would still do the samething but I would make the two kids survive and let the soilders die before I let the two kids die and let them live happily ever after and then they will go to find the father of shmell and bruno helps him
If I could change the ending I would change it to when Bruno's dad dies and bruno makes the world a better place.
If I could change the ending of the story Shmuel and Bruno would of made it out of the tank and didn't find his father and he would have to live with Bruno and his family and is treated well
If I was shmuel I would feel sad that my dad is not there, now I have nobody to talk to.
If I was shmell I would fell sad.The reason because that was the only father he had.Also it seem like his father loved him so much.
If I was the boy behind the fence I would run out of that place and find a wig and hind for a while until they stop searching
If I could change the ending of the story , I would make it so Shamel (the boy inside the fence) and Burno (The boy outside the fence) could be friends forever and that shamel could find his father and get out of the situation he was living in.
If I were Shamel I would feel sad that my father left. Even though he didn't know him I would still be sad just because of the thought that my father had left.
If I were the boy behind the fence i would forget about my father and escape under the fence and kill the boy and start acting like him and live my life .
If I was the boy and I knew that my father had left I would be really sad and I would be willing to go find him just like Shumuel in the story, I would also be worried about about him.
At the end of the story I would have changed the son and his friend getting killed.I would change, like when the man gave him the food and the man walked in he would of let them off with a warning and if they did it again they would be beat.If my father were gone I would go looking for him and and fell nervous and sad.
If I could change the end of the story I would make Hitler whip his son but when he was done he would find out that he whipped his son. Then he killed his son's friend.
I would change the ending so the two boys would not
die and the father would not kill the jews.Then the Jews would be left alone for the rest of there lives.
If I was bruno i would stop the gas tank and make sure it would not blow up so the people wont turn into ash and then bruno can tell his dad to not to do this to the people.
If i could change the ending I will make the commandant turn on Hitler and shoot him and free the prisoners and the boy in the fence found his father. Also they moved back to berlin
If I would change the end of the story the two little boys would have got away before the bell had rang. The two boys would have went under the fence and heed away while the smoke was going. Then he would supply food, water, and shared his clothing.
If I was the bruno I would not go in the fence because
I would be scared.
At the end of the story I think the boy shouldn't have went through the fence
I think that if I was Schemel I would feel so sad that my father was missing and if I was Bruno I would be mad at my father if I found out that he was killing people who were blamed by Adolf Hitler even if they didn't do anything to deserve this and at the end of the story I think that Schemel and Bruno should have lived and found Schemel's father rather than died.
At the end of the story I think the boy shouldn't have went through the fence
If I was schmuel I would fell sad.The reason because that was the only father he had.Also it seem like his father loved him so much.So he (the father) went to go look forhis only son .but not knowing that his ashes were in the tank.
If I could change the end of the story I would change the part when the man kill both of the boy's. I would change that because I would feel bad for myself for killing two innocent little boy's.That's why I would change the end of the story.
If I could change the end of the story I would make lil boys live. Schmuel I would find his father and mom and his sisters. Bruno would have asked his father about his job and why he did what he did. Bruno's father would come to his sences and realize what he was doing was wrong and he would change his evil ways.
If I could change the end of the story it would be that Bruno father would realize how terrible he has been and treat him how he treats his sister. For Shmuel that he would live and find his father and be happy again
At the end of the story I would make Bruno and Schmel get out of the chamber
I would have let both of the boys survive
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